HAIKU
by Brody
Tall trees
rustling
Endlessly
touching the sky
Great for
climbing up.
Nice,
ragavan
I like
it…-skylar
Nice job Brody
From Connor
Hi-Chews are tasty,
They are my favorite candy,
They are so juicy
Mom says go outside,
I take a walk in the woods,
Nature is beauty.
Cheetahs are so fast,
They are the best animal,
Really they are cool
Vanilla ice cream,
So refreshing in summer,
The endless great taste.
This is very…
creative. –Alynah
“Very interesting,
creative, and good.”-Faith
“very good writing” –Liam
Very interesting…
-Adeline
Umm…I really have no
words to describe this… it is good though-maddie
“Lets gooooooo dane!
Also very creative…”-raggs
This is good…-Skylar
Haiku
By: Olivia Adams
1. The flip of a page
And some fascinated eyes
Is reading a book
2.
Snap of your fingers
As sass slips out of your lips
Finished with a hair flip
3.
Thoughts come from your brain
Then transformed into lyrics
Then a song is made
4.
Put a brush through hair
Then you split it into three
Braid it to the end
5. Russel in a bush
A small patter in a tree
The sounds of nature
Dear liv this is really good this has
to be in the magazine right now
Liv-This haiku does really sound like
you…-ragavan
“Liv, this is you in a haiku.”-Faith
SHADOW
Once
alive, a living thing
to now you would call it
a dark shadow.
-Paige McCovey
“Good job…”
ragavan said.
Very deep I
like it - skylar
That is so
good that I’m goanna die! (The death)
-
Lucia
This is
really goodJ- DomfoJ
This is good
c: -Alynah .p.
By Skylar
Waves of blue and white
Fish of colors
The sand in between my
toes
Amazing sounds rest in the beach
Train
Life is like a train,
Keep going forward and
moving really enjoying,
But one
day we get down.
-
Lucia Zhang
Paige
“This is
really good! I love this, keep up the good work.” J -Alynah
Haiku Writing
by Dane
The wolf growls loudly,
He is about to eat me,
Those are my last words.
The
stars in the sky
Are so
brilliant and bright
In the dark of night
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